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- Wed Mar 16, 2022 8:44 am
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Head First
- Replies: 10
- Views: 864
Re: Head First
Head First By Mandibles I woke into a vivid dream that fell through a fold in reality and showed me the earth without land or sea just the people’s souls in an endless stream the souls were humming a vibrant song that fell and rose as the tides would come rushing onward always forward Chaos ordered ...
- Tue Mar 15, 2022 11:09 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: I'm going out the window (Head First prefight)
- Replies: 15
- Views: 933
Re: I'm going out the window (Head First prefight)
Mandibles actually submitted something to the fight this time around! I am extremely pleased with what we wrote, so that in and of itself is a win.
- Fri Nov 19, 2021 4:02 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
- Replies: 33
- Views: 2794
Re: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
Thank you for taking the time to write this! I really appreciate it as I am going over it and reworking the arrangement and mix. I’ll post when it’s done!Jim of Seattle wrote: ↑Fri Nov 19, 2021 3:12 pmSo Cybronica, I have gone through Banshee half a dozen times now. I think it's pretty cool…
- Thu Nov 18, 2021 8:16 am
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
- Replies: 33
- Views: 2794
Re: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
Hey everybody, listened to everything. Lots of interesting things that this cruel, cruel challenge brought forth! If you are interested in any feedback, PM me and happy to go into however much detail you are interested in. Thanks for the fun hour! Hey Jim! Even though I’m a little late, I’d love to...
- Fri Nov 05, 2021 7:51 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
- Replies: 33
- Views: 2794
Re: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
So, as trained singer and former voice teacher, I would l o v e to talk to you about your approach to singing. This is actually a very common thing to happen (even among opera singers!), and almost always it comes down to breath and breath support. If the breath is under supported, the tone will co...
- Wed Nov 03, 2021 9:01 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
- Replies: 33
- Views: 2794
Re: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
For some reason, whenever I record vocals, I'm always a semi-tone flat. I've never managed to work out how to fix it when singing, so I correct it post-recording. It's only ever a semi-tone or so, and it's normally a pretty invisible fix. So, as trained singer and former voice teacher, I would l o ...
- Wed Nov 03, 2021 2:35 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
- Replies: 33
- Views: 2794
Re: Spin Tunes 18 Round 3 - Tell Me What You Want
Quick thoughts. Cybronica : HEART. Super fun. I want to hear big guitars with this. This does feel like it wants something providing countermelody to your vocal lines. As it is, it feels vampy and unfinished. One of the better vocal performances of the week. This was fun and Halloweeny 🎃 Thank you ...
- Fri Oct 08, 2021 3:36 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: SpinTunes 18 Round 1 Challenge 'Color Me Impressed'
- Replies: 31
- Views: 3104
Re: SpinTunes 18 Round 1 Challenge 'Color Me Impressed'
One note, you seem to be going through in the order of the album and if so, I think you accidentally missed the Stacking Theory song (it's the second one on my playlist, called This Pale Blue Dot). Ooh! Yes I DID miss it! Thanks for pointing that out! I’m really impressed by the caliber of your rev...
- Fri Oct 08, 2021 3:33 pm
- Forum: SpinTunes
- Topic: SpinTunes 18 Round 1 Challenge 'Color Me Impressed'
- Replies: 31
- Views: 3104
Re: SpinTunes 18 Round 1 Challenge 'Color Me Impressed'
From the SpinTunes blog - Round 1 is posted! … The only other way to get your music played at the LP is to cover "Today's The Day" by Inverse T. Clown or "Right Again" by Mandibles. I only just saw this! I’m delighted! I really hope someone DOES cover it- I’d love to hear other ...
- Fri Sep 10, 2021 4:12 pm
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: I hide my scars (Behind a Mask reviews)
- Replies: 31
- Views: 3859
Re: I hide my scars (Behind a Mask reviews)
- Tue Sep 07, 2021 7:38 pm
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: I hide my scars (Behind a Mask reviews)
- Replies: 31
- Views: 3859
Re: I hide my scars (Behind a Mask reviews)
Ok, I totally spaced and didn't remember I had to send a separate mp3 for the actual fight... I just sent a file, its the exact same as the live fight - any chance you could add us in?
Thank you Ken for pointing this out!!
Thank you Ken for pointing this out!!
- Sat Aug 28, 2021 4:19 pm
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Behind a Mask
- Replies: 18
- Views: 1466
Re: Behind a Mask
Behind a Mask Mandibles Catching words like butterflies Hope to filter out the lies Dull the spike antennae and vermillion wing Don't take at face value what the cricket sings I'd never say it to your face, But thought that you should know The words your sister whispered When they thought they were ...
- Thu Aug 26, 2021 12:52 pm
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Marked Man
- Replies: 8
- Views: 998
Re: Marked Man
Cybronica Marked Man Chorus: Im a marked man with a target on my back I can never stop to rest, take a breather, or relax, Im a marked man; if you look me in the eye You’ll see broken frightened spirit, yeah, who knows he’s gonna die Im gonna die This mirror’s made of Silver, it’s been reflecting me...
- Thu Aug 26, 2021 8:38 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Soap and water for the (Marked Man reviews)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2094
- Thu Aug 26, 2021 7:22 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Soap and water for the (Marked Man reviews)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2094
Re: Soap and water for the (Marked Man reviews)
Crawling out of the woodwork to say I sent in a song extremely late... One of those 'life is too much right now, instead of doing what I need to do, let's write a song two days after it's due' situations. I'm not sure if it will get in the line up, but if it doesn't, I'll try to post a link just to ...
- Tue Jun 29, 2021 12:41 pm
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Final Round "Blue"
- Replies: 20
- Views: 2525
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Final Round "Blue"
Anybody else have this stuck in their head the last couple days?
https://www.tiktok.com/@yo.itsoz/video/ ... 38?lang=en
https://www.tiktok.com/@yo.itsoz/video/ ... 38?lang=en
- Tue Jun 22, 2021 10:44 pm
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"
- Replies: 73
- Views: 7245
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"
<3JonPorobil wrote: ↑Tue Jun 22, 2021 8:13 pmBelated reviews!
I apologize to the shadows. You were all great too, especially Mandibles ( ) and Dented Bento, but now I need to go write some reviews for "The Only Way Out."
- Tue Jun 22, 2021 10:40 pm
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
- Replies: 36
- Views: 3854
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"
See-Man-Ski - I really appreciate you changing up the genre again. I never pictured you doing a Black-Keys style stomper, but you pull it off well. The problem I have with this song is your implementation of the challenge. It's the middle four lines of each verse, right? You're playing that lick in...
- Tue Jun 22, 2021 10:13 pm
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
- Replies: 36
- Views: 3854
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"
. Grumpy Mike -…. Challengewise: You said, "The transition back to C involves Adim -> D7 -> C. Which is downward. I hope you didn’t mean to specify something else that isn’t a technical definition of modulation!" Congratz. Your transition is downward. I just quoted the definition from the...
- Tue Jun 22, 2021 5:57 am
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
- Replies: 36
- Views: 3854
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"
Hot pink halo: your voice isn’t quiet as strong and confident as it has been the last couple songs. I think the whistle/flute would have been better singled- doubled puts a magnifying glass to tuning issues. That’s one single alto recorder, in tune (checked with a tuner while I was playing and doub...
- Mon Jun 21, 2021 9:37 pm
- Forum: Nur Ein
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
- Replies: 36
- Views: 3854
Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"
Since i keep forgetting to write them later in the week, here are my (very quick) reviews written during my second listen through. Didn’t proof read, so sorry in advanced for typos. How is a downward modulation different from a plain modulation? I could go from F to A and make the music sound like i...
- Sun Jun 20, 2021 6:00 pm
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Nur Ein XVI - The Only Way Out
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1103
Re: Nur Ein XVI - The Only Way Out
The Only Way Out Mandibles (shadow) This song is about the experience of having to end a toxic friendship, One where you can't just drift apart, you have to set boundaries, and the toxic friend lashes out at being challenged. Downward modulation (still not sure that's a quantifiable thing) comes at ...