Sven Mullet: Like the half step drop in the melody guitar work good sometimes seems something occasionally falls out of the pocket. Good over all. Tonetripper: Okay!! if you insist I’ll give it to you! Hospital grade vocal in the chorus, distortion on the vocal track hides a multitude of sins but g...

jast wrote:my standards for a cappella music are normally higher.

Mine too. Got the idea Sat. Had no time to massage.
Max

What's schturm? "Sturm und Drang (the conventional translation is "Storm and Stress"; a more literal translation, however, might be storm and urge, storm and longing, or storm and impulse) is the name of a movement in German literature and music taking place from the late 1760s throu...

Steve Durand wrote:

max the cat wrote:
Steve Durand – I’m drunk with horns

Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Good! They set an inebriated mood that gave the lyric a lovely slosh.

Andre was here at midnight – Pocket is a tad loose. There’s a fine line between deconstruction and destruction. Not sure which side of the line this song is on, actually I am. Drew Piston – I’m not sure why the vocoder. From what I can surmise through all the vocode the vocal was good enough to sta...

But seriously? Creating a band for the sake of a song is a Songfight tradition! I don't know much about Songfight but I know what I like:) But Seriously, I can be more insightful about a songwriter as I get to know his or her body of work. It's just harder to be helpful in a more substantive way wh...

And praising Pumpkin Buzzard for not using the title? Hmm. Some reviewers complain if you use the title, some if you don't, and some don't even evaluate your song compared to the other songs in the fight but to their expectations of what you can do. ;) There's just no predicting how they're going t...

Technical Difficulties: Well done, great track, clean, silly-sinister with intelligence. I’m getting a Golden Compass message here could I be mistaken? Ecclesiastical exasperation? If so even better. Jimmy Jet and his TV Set: like the hook, I don’t get the lyric - too many non- sequiturs. Why are y...

Still, I've had enough carrot sticks shoved down my throat. All anyone tries to give you is another friggin' carrot stick. To me, a surrealist song about a woman's increasingly outlandish acts with the only explanation being "to be difficult" is more compelling then yet another song about...

TV's Kyle : I wonder if the lyric stayed in reality if it couldn’t have been more effective. Some times the rhymes try a little too hard. But that said I like this it’s fun And well put together… “Just to tune the difficulty.” ??? If my lyric stayed in reality, I'd be bored out of my skull. I would...

Lord of Oats: All the wankyness works really well. The straining voice in this sorta demented circus back drop is terrific. French, Humm great minds☺ Barrels, Leaves & Strings: Frankie Valley and Ringo Starr put some their molecules in a giant cyclotron. In the ensuing collision there...

Mime A little hard to hear the words. The vibe is a tad mild for the sentiment. Yes the revolution is now! Sharpen your weapons and I’ll follow you. Pitchy vocal may be intentional if not it’s pitchy. Burritos in Space Love the intro…where’s the song? Blues Manufacturing Facility I don’t have anyth...

And Counting From the top of Carl Rove Freedom Tower I gaze out at rolling landfill hills That rise up into the ozone mists With their cadmium slopes, And their oily wisps of metallic greens and amethysts. Two thousand ten, two thousand when Feel the pressure mounting Each new year is what I fear En...

Acid Cadillac : Hard to fault the song, I might work with a really good performer but reaching for attitude with effects doesn’t get it for me. Adam Adamant : Fun Bax : Killing her softly… somewhere in the mix the track got lost. Maybe a shorter fade? Good Song Big Crouton : Wow what an production, ...

Boys Boys.. Actually NHT, whether a good songwriter or bad had an interesting point of discussion. His method of songwriting is pretty much what Paul Simon does and it does make for some fresh and interesting, quite often delicious abstract lyrics. However, many great songs have been written to exis...

Damn! What? damn! and wow damn!

MTC

Max the Cat - Nice acoustic guitar sound. The bass is farty though. I don't like it. Vocals sounds really good. I am impressed that this is a dense mix, but everything fits together really well. How did you do it? Is this all midi?

All Midi except the guitars, bass may be over compressed

.... *scurries off into a dark corner and cries*[/quote] Damn! Now I'm going to have to coax you out from under the bed. Seriously I think your chorus could have been a little more straight forward. As for "risky and frisky" it's not the fact that they don't apply, its the silly sound of t...

<a href="http://beesbuzz.biz/~fluffy/bad_cat_reviews.mp3">someone transcribe this plsthx</a> I wish I had time to transcribe your reviews. I find listening as opoposed to reading really enlightning in so many ways.(Inflection, hearing the tune as it is critiqued) A really great idea. Do y...

Invite to talk about my lyric? red rag, meet bull :) As for the chorus - it goes like this - the character lives in a Dog Eat Dog world, therefore he is nothin but a Poor Little Human because he wants to pretend he is a Cat, whereas that world, as beautiful as it appears, he could never be part of,...

Dollar Bill ... Voice sounds like the singer on the Melodyne demo. Before or after? :) I posted the words in the archive for ya. after Nice lyric sort of a twisted "Lets get away from it all" With more time maybe syllables could have been chopped or added to really lay tight and smooth in...

Ned Plimpton Orchestra I think the track is trying a little too hard. Somehow the rhythm doesn’t really swing like it could. I think things need to be simplified a bit. Obviously there is skill here but it feels somewhat self-conscious. I don’t mean it can’t be sophisticated just a few less n...