Search found 10 matches
- Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:12 pm
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Art Bomb
- Replies: 19
- Views: 4467
Re: Art Bomb
We were young, we were wild, we were beautiful With art bombs in our hearts Love was the light we were reaching for To burn us up And blow us apart Younger and wilder, more beautiful With art bombs in our hearts Out of the light we were reaching for We were born to run And never get far You left you...
- Mon Nov 25, 2013 4:08 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Give me your reviews, or else (Bully Reviews)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 11528
Re: Give me your reviews, or else (Bully Reviews)
Ryan Dawson -- The intro has a different tempo, which is slightly disconcerting. Good song; the verse builds well. By about 2:16 the song needs a change. Your voice has strong and tender qualities, but it feels slightly strained and tense, as if suffering from stage fright (which I doubt is the cas...
- Fri Nov 22, 2013 1:03 am
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Bully (Bully!)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2758
Re: Bully (Bully!)
Pass me over I’m too easy Look right through me Flesh and bone No more use, I’m Just too broken Squeezed of blood, I’m Just a stone All my empty All my lonely All my hopeless, shaking rage Desperation Reach for something Wish you violently away I forgive you It’s not easy Burned in anger Torn apart ...
- Sun Oct 27, 2013 3:12 pm
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Glennny Wuz Robbed! (Red Thief reviews)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 11945
Re: Glennny Wuz Robbed! (Red Thief reviews)
Enjoyed listening to all the entries. Ryan Dawson Well played acoustic tune. Nice tone on the guitar. Lyrics very poetic. Was this direct with vsts or just close miced? Thanks! Glad you liked my song. My tech is very primitive. I don't have any way to record on my computer. I used a Zoom Q3 to reco...
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 3:00 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Glennny Wuz Robbed! (Red Thief reviews)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 11945
Re: Glennny Wuz Robbed! (Red Thief reviews)
Schlimminy Cricket Ryan Dawson “click record” sound at the beginning… I like the inclusion. Did you record guitar and vocals simultaneously? Lyrically profound, even if by accident. No denying the overall skill/talent here. The soft touch on the guitar at the end and the ending chord choice itself....
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 6:08 pm
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Red Thief
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1626
Re: Red Thief
Do the dead believe, Alone on autumn-bitter streets In grave machines behind fog lights, What the dying see In the doorways of their dreams In the fever throes of night? Stars deliver me my Immortality in Sparrows’ memories of time When the red thief comes And the dead hearts drum I will rise again ...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:46 am
- Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
- Topic: Let's All Vote Twice! (Overcast reviews)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6094
Re: Let's All Vote Twice! (Overcast reviews)
Ryan Dawson Very nice guitar playing. Not bad singing. Did you record the guitar and vocals together live? Anyway, sounds good. I think this could benefit from some simple accompaniment, maybe some occasional flute or violin or cello or something. There's a really horrible digital distortion/noise ...
- Thu Oct 17, 2013 3:24 am
- Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
- Topic: Overcast
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1708
Re: Overcast
Overcast (Shelter) All the ruthless smiles The toothless miles I walked To win your heart In the listless eyes Of suicides Love is a liar’s art Did you grow much fonder When we were apart? Overcast in June The lasting moon undone Behind your sky With my shard wings fledged Razor-edged I’m ready enou...
- Wed Oct 09, 2013 5:49 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: Introduction: Ryan Dawson
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3429
Re: Introduction: Ryan Dawson
Thank you! I will do my best.
- Wed Oct 09, 2013 5:25 pm
- Forum: Introductions
- Topic: Introduction: Ryan Dawson
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3429
Introduction: Ryan Dawson
Hello, all! I'm new to Song Fight. "Overcast" is the first fight I've entered so far. I've been writing music for about 25 years, and I play 4 instruments. I'm also a writer, and I published my book, The King's Eagle , last year. My next one, Melidora , will be available early next year. H...