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by neutronflow
Sat Aug 18, 2018 10:00 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I Hope You Get A"round" to your (Square States Reviews)
Replies: 7
Views: 149

Re: I Hope You Get A"round" to your (Square States Reviews)

My song appears to have been lost in the ether. I'm sending it again.
by neutronflow
Tue Aug 07, 2018 9:36 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Square States
Replies: 6
Views: 236

Re: Square States

Square states - Tim Hinkle Square states an unmovable assertion never wavering, immobile in the face of opposition Triangle interjects to disrupt a static view pointed questions digging furrows in the mortar of tradition Pentagon and Octagram, Crescent, Cross, and Star we’re all pegs looking for sp...
by neutronflow
Sat Jun 02, 2018 7:44 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: United We Stand (Crack in the Wall Reviews)
Replies: 16
Views: 982

Re: United We Stand (Crack in the Wall Reviews)

Pigfarmer Jr wrote:edit to add... didn't address the wall. The wall is the veil of secrecy in government, or the difference between the rulers and the ruled. the idea that what goes on behind close doors....


I kind of got that. "The curtain is ripped/he's tearing it down." I get a Wizard of Oz vibe.
by neutronflow
Fri Jun 01, 2018 11:39 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: United We Stand (Crack in the Wall Reviews)
Replies: 16
Views: 982

Re: United We Stand (Crack in the Wall Reviews)

Pigfarmer Jr: I'm glad I heard this one before The Cow Exchange's my first time through. "Can't believe the shit I see" has taken on different associations on subsequent listens. I love the sound of the guitars when this starts up. (And continues on, but it's quite striking right at the st...
by neutronflow
Mon May 28, 2018 4:06 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Early signs your house is falling apart (Crack In The Wall prefight)
Replies: 9
Views: 492

Re: Early signs your house is falling apart (Crack In The Wall prefight)

Lunkhead wrote:
neutronflow wrote:It looks like I sent in the mp3 with about 7 seconds of click track at the start. Sigh.


Feel free to resubmit minus the click intro.

Resent.
by neutronflow
Mon May 28, 2018 2:27 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Early signs your house is falling apart (Crack In The Wall prefight)
Replies: 9
Views: 492

Re: Early signs your house is falling apart (Crack In The Wall prefight)

It looks like I sent in the mp3 with about 7 seconds of click track at the start. Sigh.
by neutronflow
Mon May 28, 2018 2:24 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Crack in the Wall
Replies: 4
Views: 190

Re: Crack in the Wall

Crack in the Wall - Tim Hinkle Sunlight slips in through a crack in the wall Shadows are pushed to the side But the rays don’t go deep in the darkness to trawl And from most will an eidolon hide Walk through my garden of things that used to be Retreat from the present slight Today is blinding, my vi...
by neutronflow
Sat May 26, 2018 9:09 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Time To Pick Up (Your Discarded Cigarette Reviews)
Replies: 18
Views: 834

Re: Time To Pick Up (Your Discarded Cigarette Reviews)

All these songs are really good. It's really difficult to decide which songs to vote for.

owl wrote:What is that lead instrument? It has a very odd sound, like a distorted kazoo.!

Yes, it is a distorted kazoo. Specifically, a Kazooka electric kazoo.
by neutronflow
Fri May 18, 2018 8:22 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Time To Pick Up (Your Discarded Cigarette Reviews)
Replies: 18
Views: 834

Re: Time To Pick Up (Your Discarded Cigarette Reviews)

I think it might be that people are focused on Nur Ein rather than anything to do with the title.
by neutronflow
Sat May 12, 2018 4:33 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Your Discarded Cigarette
Replies: 2
Views: 168

Re: Your Discarded Cigarette

Your Discarded Cigarette - Tim Hinkle Extinguished well before my time Snuffed though my flame was fresh lit For the rarefied air of the interior You discarded your cigarette I’ve tried to forget the touch of your lips but the memory still filters through Such a drag that you won’t take another drag...
by neutronflow
Sat May 12, 2018 4:28 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Who's Gonna Win? (Guessing Game Reviews)
Replies: 9
Views: 638

Re: Who's Gonna Win? (Guessing Game Reviews)

Vom Vorton: This is my favorite from this fight. Pigfarmer Jr: Guitars sound great, vocal kinda off. I actually like the way the song just trails off, though, I think it works with the material. Lichen Throat: The opening put me in mind of John Carpenter. The chorus is pretty good. I like the little...
by neutronflow
Fri May 11, 2018 8:23 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: We are perfect in our dreams
Replies: 7
Views: 2978

Re: We are perfect in our dreams

We are Perfect in Our Dreams - Tim Hinkle boy in the mirror with a cheap guitar playing for toothpaste and an Ivory bar but in my mind’s eye I’m a superstar on the TV girls line up—you know they just can’t wait to meet me, touch my hair, they think I’m great I see them smiling as I masturbate in the...
by neutronflow
Fri May 11, 2018 8:09 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: I Like to Pretend
Replies: 12
Views: 4566

Re: I Like to Pretend

I Like to Pretend - Tim Hinkle two tables for one at Dragon Garden you’ve been seated with your back to me but in the window your face is reflected I’m captivated by your beauty I stare enraptured at you eating and I slowly sip my oolong tea I slip out quietly while you’re paying to ensure that you ...
by neutronflow
Fri May 11, 2018 7:04 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Guessing Game
Replies: 4
Views: 219

Re: Guessing Game

Guessing Game - Tim Hinkle A story can hold every part of you a self built on extempore bluster When we ask you just exactly who you are a bit of bull’s the best that you can muster Your story will be guessed if it’s not told We all glimpse what we assume’s the inner you All the things about yoursel...
by neutronflow
Thu Mar 02, 2006 6:11 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Pugnacious Prefight Pugalism
Replies: 57
Views: 21166

I'm in for "Butterfly Massacre."
by neutronflow
Mon Feb 27, 2006 11:20 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: My song rocks! (I like to pretend reviews)
Replies: 124
Views: 54408

Apply Liberally to Inside of Mouth: I’m a sexy robot! This is catchy (I can’t imagine why). I’m humming it. I’m doing a funny voice. I’m dancing jerkily around the room. Damn you, this song will be detrimental to my marriage. Brass Gopher: This is awful. I think that may be the point, so i...
by neutronflow
Tue Feb 21, 2006 2:15 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: MLA or APA? (elements of style reviews)
Replies: 82
Views: 37364

I always google the song titles.

Then again, I google just about anything, just about all the time.
by neutronflow
Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:57 pm
Forum: Quality Control
Topic: Broken archive link
Replies: 3
Views: 2484

Broken archive link

The links to "...In Bed" from the artist pages don't work.

They come up as:
http://www.songfight.org/songpage.php?key=...in_bed

when they should leave out the dots:
http://www.songfight.org/songpage.php?key=in_bed

The link to the song on the top archive page is fine.

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