Nur Ein XVII - Round Seven - Ascent

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Nur Ein XVII - Round Seven - Ascent

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Ascent, by Stacking Theory
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I think about death quite a bit, and in this house we often talk about what it would be like to be alone after loss. In my Noble Idiocy I proclaim that I’d like to outlive Kym, to save her from the burden of being alone.

This song explores the grim reality of what it would actually be like to be alone after loss - how easy it would be to lose the will to continue, and to create a convenient narrative of acceptance and release.

I was very happy to be able to deploy my secret weapon on this track. Kym has been my hero and my saviour for the past 26 years, and it was an absolute joy to have her joins us toward the end of the song, calling down from the stars.

I also had the privilege of having Crumpet (from Hot Pink Halo) adding violin and recorder, and mixing the song for me.

Thank you all for listening, sharing, supporting, and inviting me to be better than I was 8 weeks ago. Each and every one of you should look at yourself in a mirror and know that before you is the image of greatness.
I have not led a perfect life
I’ve said some hurtful words and been in fist fights
I guess I could’ve been more if I tried
but every thing I did I wouldn’t replace

I haven’t travelled all the earth
the truth of things is I’ve seen barely nothing
but everywhere I’ve been I shared with you
and I would not have had it any other way

and now I’m ready to climb
the stairway to the stars
I know that’s where you are
waiting for me

I know I’ve had a decent run
I’ve had my ups and downs and lost less than I’ve won
and though I know it wasn’t always fair
I know that I was at my best when you were there

but since you left me here alone
the seeds we planted have refused to grow
and even though you are the soil
without your voice there is no reason for this at all

and now I’m ready to climb
the stairway to the stars
I know that’s where you are
waiting for me

you’re ready to climb
to be by my side
no lovers’ lament
begin your ascent

together again
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Re: Nur Ein XVII - Round Seven - Ascent

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Ascent by Vom Vorton
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I'm acutely aware how many of my songs are about being sad lately, and I apologise. Believe me, I wish it wasn't the first thing on my mind most weeks!

For this title and the end of this run of songs I wanted to try to write about climbing out of those lows and trying to find a way to feel better - I do also live on a steep hill, and another influence here is the video game Celeste, which I've been playing lately - it's about a young woman coming to terms with her problems by climbing a mountain, with the help / hindrance of another part of her personality that she had been trying to suppress. It's very good. I died 1473 times getting to the ending.
I’ve been falling down a lot lately
why do I live on top of a hill?
if the cramp don’t get you, don’t let it upset you
the sweat surely will
every walk back home
seems to become an epic quest
a trip out to the shops, bringing bags back to the top
feels like attempting Everest

but I guess I’ll keep on climbing
no matter what the doubting voices say
I don’t think that I’m accounting for the steepness of the mountain
but I’ll keep on anyway

I’ve been talking to myself a lot lately
how much should it worry me
that my main reservation with this one way conversation
is that I’m pretty good company
life inside an echo chamber
I recognise the absurdity
is it a sign of madness to navigate the sadness
by singing my own harmonies

I guess I’ll keep on going
no matter what the voices say
I don’t think that I’m accounting for the steepness of the mountain
but I’ll keep on anyway
and I’ll keep on climbing
no matter what the voices say
I don’t think that I’m accounting for the steepness of the mountain
but I’ll keep on anyway

I’d always been a optimist, until recently…
I can’t deny the last few years have knocked it out of me
but now the sun is shining, and baby I declare
I think I sense a scent of possibility in the air
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Re: Nur Ein XVII - Round Seven - Ascent

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Ascent

shadow submission by Rattlebox

Take me with you when you go
Take me with you when you go
Carry me upon your back
My melted wings
Take me with you when you go

There’s no need to walk away
There’s no need to walk away
Hold my hand, I promise not
To pull you in
Is there nothing I can say?

It was
So hard for you to detach
To resume your ascent
Into the stratosphere
Bright stars and golden angels
I don’t blame or regret
Your choice to leave

To rise up, rise up and away from me
Rise up, up, up and away from me

Could you even say goodbye
Could you even say goodbye
Coming close enough so I
Could see the love
Dilated in your eyes

You were
So done with all the details
Every shattering glass and
Burning butterfly
Red flags and bloody sunsets
I don’t blame or regret
Your choice to leave

To rise up, rise up and away from me
Rise up, up, up and away from me

Take me with you when you go
Take me with you when you go
I swear that I can fly
Don’t run away from me
Rise up, rise up and away from me
Rise up, up, up and away from me
I swear that I can fly
I swear that I can fly
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Re: Nur Ein XVII - Round Seven - Ascent

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gizo wrote:
Sat Jul 09, 2022 6:04 pm
Ascent, by Stacking Theory
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recorder
*cough* actually a big long metal flute this time! *cough*
Devil’s got me Lindt! Devil’s got me Lindt!
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