Not That You Even Tried
Toby Roktot
V1
Low burning candles flutter as a breeze …sway the curtains
She lay in tranquil sleep dreaming ….sweetheart dreams….I’m certain.
I walked to the window, blue moon beams …..shining through.
Should I stay should I go …not sure what to do
I look to the east for a sign …a little push.
I need something big …..my own … burning bush
If I settle down I don’t know if I can stay satis. ..fied.
My heart whispers to me……..
Not that you even tried.
Ch
Comin’ round the mountain just to see what's there.
Take another step just to end up any where.
I like to keep movin’ just stop …..to say “hello”.
But sometimes. ….sometimes. ……..
I’m not in a hurry to go.
V2
She calls in her sleep reaches out … I should be there.
I kid myself I’m tough but. …..I really do care....
I don’t know if I can settle down and ……..be sa. .tis. fied
My heart whispers to me…….………
Not that you even tried.
Instrumental if desired……..
Ch. ..fade
Not That You Even Tried….
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- Somebody Get Me A Doctor
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- the panna cotta army
- Somebody Get Me A Doctor
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Re: Not That You Even Tried….
Not That You Even Tried
The Pannacotta Army
It was always going to end like this
Not that you even tried
On the surface everything was good
But the cracks were all inside
Now the light’s gone
All I have is darkness
We were always gonna crash and burn
The signs were there to read
It was inevitable as the rain
When the sun is what you need
The line’s dead
There’s no sound emerging
It feels cold
Now winter’s returning
A glimmer of daylight
Won’t make things all right
I was feeling almost positive
Until it started to unwind
It was always gonna fall apart
Not that you even tried
Now the light’s gone
All that’s left is darkness
And the fruits of
A bitter harvest
We were never gonna the finish line
From the very start you gave up trying
The Pannacotta Army
It was always going to end like this
Not that you even tried
On the surface everything was good
But the cracks were all inside
Now the light’s gone
All I have is darkness
We were always gonna crash and burn
The signs were there to read
It was inevitable as the rain
When the sun is what you need
The line’s dead
There’s no sound emerging
It feels cold
Now winter’s returning
A glimmer of daylight
Won’t make things all right
I was feeling almost positive
Until it started to unwind
It was always gonna fall apart
Not that you even tried
Now the light’s gone
All that’s left is darkness
And the fruits of
A bitter harvest
We were never gonna the finish line
From the very start you gave up trying
- AJOwens
- Ice Cream Man
- Posts: 1001
- Joined: Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:50 am
- Instruments: bass, guitar, keyboards, drums, flute
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- Pronouns: he/him
- Location: Dartmouth, Nova Scotia
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Re: Not That You Even Tried….
The morning you announced yourself
I felt so sleepy-eyed
The radio was telling me
How twenty-one had died
I drank a cup of coffee
As the nation softly cried
By the time you said your heart went out
My eyes were open wide
It's not like it's the first time
We've seen it all before
Someone buys a gun and then goes
Crashing through a door
They start to fire wildly
Everybody hits the floor
They spray the room with murder
And go down the hall for more
You mouth your hollow platitudes
And ask us all to pray
You offer hollow sympathy
And turn your face away
You said you would remember
You'd honour those who died
But you never managed anything
Not that you even tried
This time it may be twenty-one
The next time, sixty-four
So easy to get angry and just
Walk into a store
You buy the thing, you point it,
Feel the well-oiled trigger glide
You make it look so easy
Not that you even tried
I felt so sleepy-eyed
The radio was telling me
How twenty-one had died
I drank a cup of coffee
As the nation softly cried
By the time you said your heart went out
My eyes were open wide
It's not like it's the first time
We've seen it all before
Someone buys a gun and then goes
Crashing through a door
They start to fire wildly
Everybody hits the floor
They spray the room with murder
And go down the hall for more
You mouth your hollow platitudes
And ask us all to pray
You offer hollow sympathy
And turn your face away
You said you would remember
You'd honour those who died
But you never managed anything
Not that you even tried
This time it may be twenty-one
The next time, sixty-four
So easy to get angry and just
Walk into a store
You buy the thing, you point it,
Feel the well-oiled trigger glide
You make it look so easy
Not that you even tried
- Merle Fyshwick
- Ain't Talkin' 'Bout Love
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Re: Not That You Even Tried….
Not That You Even Tried - The Magnetic Letters
Come to my cafe all the food here is sourced locally
The supermarket's just around the corner
We got bread with tomato sauce and polony
Vegetarians we can take the polony out when you order
Come by for breakfast, we got Coco Pops and orange cordial
May I suggest you bring your own milk?
Next week is Asian week we've got some two-minute noodles
If that's too ethnic we'll have polony sandwiches still
No soup, so don't even bother asking
Why don't I fetch you a microwaved pie?
Boo Hoo, you say my menu sounds disgusting
Not that you even tried my cheese platter
What's that? Kraft Singles on a plate
I'll even take the plastic off if you're out on a date
We got slow cooked beef. What's that?
If you must know it's a tin of Heinz braised steak and onion
Welcome to my cafe all you foodies
Come to my cafe the ingredients are seasonal
I guess they were when they chucked them in the tin
We got baked beans and they count as a vegetable
And don't forget the tomato sauce they put them in
Come by for breakfast - the coffee's ready in an instant
I'll pour the sugar and you can tell me 'when'
Just for the kiddies we got some gingernut biscuits
I'll draw a smiley face in texta - look you got gingerbread men
No soup - why do you keep on asking?
How 'bout I fetch you a microwaved pie?
Boo hoo, you say my cafe sounds disgusting
Not that you even tried my microwaved pie
What's that? Take a frozen pie, put it in the microwave oven on high
Then what? Maybe set the timer to five minutes, that should be enough for a microwaved pie
Welcome to my cafe all you foodies
Come to my cafe all the food here is sourced locally
The supermarket's just around the corner
We got bread with tomato sauce and polony
Vegetarians we can take the polony out when you order
Come by for breakfast, we got Coco Pops and orange cordial
May I suggest you bring your own milk?
Next week is Asian week we've got some two-minute noodles
If that's too ethnic we'll have polony sandwiches still
No soup, so don't even bother asking
Why don't I fetch you a microwaved pie?
Boo Hoo, you say my menu sounds disgusting
Not that you even tried my cheese platter
What's that? Kraft Singles on a plate
I'll even take the plastic off if you're out on a date
We got slow cooked beef. What's that?
If you must know it's a tin of Heinz braised steak and onion
Welcome to my cafe all you foodies
Come to my cafe the ingredients are seasonal
I guess they were when they chucked them in the tin
We got baked beans and they count as a vegetable
And don't forget the tomato sauce they put them in
Come by for breakfast - the coffee's ready in an instant
I'll pour the sugar and you can tell me 'when'
Just for the kiddies we got some gingernut biscuits
I'll draw a smiley face in texta - look you got gingerbread men
No soup - why do you keep on asking?
How 'bout I fetch you a microwaved pie?
Boo hoo, you say my cafe sounds disgusting
Not that you even tried my microwaved pie
What's that? Take a frozen pie, put it in the microwave oven on high
Then what? Maybe set the timer to five minutes, that should be enough for a microwaved pie
Welcome to my cafe all you foodies
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- Ain't Talkin' 'Bout Love
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Re: Not That You Even Tried….
Not That You Even Tried
(J. Bennett)
Mismatched mittens on the picket-fence
reachin' for the sky.
An exaltation, not that you even tried.
By now you're miles and miles and miles and miles and miles away,
but you know, I'm waiting in the same damn spot, every single day.
Oh, yeah...
Oh, yeah!
There's something I should whisper in your ear.
I hear the baby crying from the window
on the second floor.
I hear the mailman drop another package at the door.
I hear the blood rush in my ears
instead of sleeping-tight.
I hear drums, I hear guitars, then I hear nothing as I slide... oh, yeah...
I slide!
Then I hear nothing, but the moon pulling the tide.
Not that you ever tried.
(J. Bennett)
Mismatched mittens on the picket-fence
reachin' for the sky.
An exaltation, not that you even tried.
By now you're miles and miles and miles and miles and miles away,
but you know, I'm waiting in the same damn spot, every single day.
Oh, yeah...
Oh, yeah!
There's something I should whisper in your ear.
I hear the baby crying from the window
on the second floor.
I hear the mailman drop another package at the door.
I hear the blood rush in my ears
instead of sleeping-tight.
I hear drums, I hear guitars, then I hear nothing as I slide... oh, yeah...
I slide!
Then I hear nothing, but the moon pulling the tide.
Not that you ever tried.
- Geech
- Somebody Get Me A Doctor
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- Contact:
Re: Not That You Even Tried….
Not That You Even Tried (You're Deified)
Berkeley Social Scene
You burst on the scene with electricity
Raising the bar for brash immodesty
And everything you want falls into your arms
You stumble along drunk on autonomy
Without a try you jolt the economy
It seems everyone is swayed by your charms
It’s like you’re a force of nature
Some kind of fantastical creature
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even I can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
You push everyone back to the scenery
No one can meet your bold intensity
Your striking colors make us all look pale
You take every chance to play your vanity
Showing off shameless inanity
Comparisons to others seem to fail
It’s like you’re a force of nature
Some kind of fantastical creature
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even you can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
So many people seem to worship you
The invisible clothes you’re modeling too
Larger than life, but man, when does it end?
When you look into the crowd do you find a friend
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even you can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
Not that you even tried
Berkeley Social Scene
You burst on the scene with electricity
Raising the bar for brash immodesty
And everything you want falls into your arms
You stumble along drunk on autonomy
Without a try you jolt the economy
It seems everyone is swayed by your charms
It’s like you’re a force of nature
Some kind of fantastical creature
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even I can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
You push everyone back to the scenery
No one can meet your bold intensity
Your striking colors make us all look pale
You take every chance to play your vanity
Showing off shameless inanity
Comparisons to others seem to fail
It’s like you’re a force of nature
Some kind of fantastical creature
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even you can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
So many people seem to worship you
The invisible clothes you’re modeling too
Larger than life, but man, when does it end?
When you look into the crowd do you find a friend
Not that you even tried
You made it, you’re deified
Even you can’t deny
You made it, you’re deified
Not that you even tried
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- Paco Del Stinko
- Hot for Teacher
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Re: Not That You Even Tried….
Not That You Even Tried - Paco del Stinko
You called it a failure - Not that you even tried
You promised miracles and more - But only gave lies
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You say you're exhausted - Not that you even tried
All imaginary causes - The truth is denied
Never even lifted a finger
Never raised a hand
Never stopped to linger
Never had a plan
You said you couldn't make it - Not that you even tried
And when I called you went out - You broke down and cried
You do you do you do
You called it a failure - Not that you even tried
You promised miracles and more - But only gave lies
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You do nothing and nothing's what you do
You say you're exhausted - Not that you even tried
All imaginary causes - The truth is denied
Never even lifted a finger
Never raised a hand
Never stopped to linger
Never had a plan
You said you couldn't make it - Not that you even tried
And when I called you went out - You broke down and cried
You do you do you do
Bringin' the stink since 2006.