Spintunes 22 R2

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Spintunes 22 R2

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Challenge: Call & Response

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"Dead by December" (shadow) (LWRG)

I was dead by late December
Like the crocus and the daisies
I somehow missed the funeral
It was my obituary
Said nobody knew me
Except strange and peculiar
I didn't quite fit in
So they came for me with pitchforks

I didn't know I broke the rules
I never attended school
Didn't see the arrows coming
of the critical and the cruel

Killed off my best intentions
A bear trap of derision
There's no love in this town
For someone a little different
The bells they rang out loudly
Pallbearers dragged their feet
When my dreams died
There was no one left to mourn me

I didn't know I broke the rules
I never attended school
Didn't see the arrows coming
of the critical and the cruel

Three days, crept out the cave
A heart hoping for change
No one cleaned up the blood
The song remains the same

I didn't know I broke the rules
I never attended school
Didn't see the arrows coming
of the critical and the cruel
can I come home? (No, No, No)
can I come home? (No, No, No)
can I come home? (No, No, No)
can I come home? (No, No, No)

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Credits:
vocals, Omnichord, mixing - R. Brookes McKenzie
guitar, recording - E. Niveous Rayside
drums - Jay Ackley
"That organ is piercing my soul" - Adam Adamant
"Lo-fi doom rock isn't my bag at all. I'm trying to imagine this with professional production and played/sung perfectly and I don't think I'd like it much more." - furrypedro
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