Under Over
- jeff robertson
- Panama
- Posts: 809
- Joined: Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:29 pm
- Instruments: guitar, bass, programming
- Recording Method: Reaper, Audacity
- Submitting as: FLVXXVM FLORVM, Jeff Robertson and the Neo-Candylanders
- Pronouns: he/him
- Location: Illinoiss
Under Over
as performed by FLVXXVM FLORVM
I'm finally over
feeling under
and feeling sorry for myself
I used to worry
i used to wonder
if there was you and no one else.
It's a brand new pain.
It's a fresh new wound.
And it ain't nothing
I ever felt with you.
I'm finally over
feeling under
in the shadow of your love
now I got me
a brand new heartache
and she's all I'm thinking of
and you will never know
or ever understand
cause I could die right now
and be a happy man
(solo)
I'm finally over
feeling under
thinking you're the only girl
I feel the heat now
but the pain is sweet now
and I'm alright with this world
I know what passion means
I know what love is for
and it's the greatest thing
I never felt before
(solo)
I'm finally over
feeling under
and feeling sorry for myself
I used to worry
i used to wonder
if there was you and no one else.
It's a brand new pain.
It's a fresh new wound.
And it ain't nothing
I ever felt with you.
I'm finally over
feeling under
in the shadow of your love
now I got me
a brand new heartache
and she's all I'm thinking of
and you will never know
or ever understand
cause I could die right now
and be a happy man
(solo)
I'm finally over
feeling under
thinking you're the only girl
I feel the heat now
but the pain is sweet now
and I'm alright with this world
I know what passion means
I know what love is for
and it's the greatest thing
I never felt before
(solo)
- nyjm
- Ice Cream Man
- Posts: 1066
- Joined: Thu Mar 17, 2005 6:14 am
- Instruments: acoustic guitar, electric guitar, synth, various MIDI instruments
- Recording Method: Reaper, Line 6 POD, GLS Audio 57 and 58
- Submitting as: noah mclaughlin, Ford's Theater Disaster, Juliet's Happy Dagger
- Location: atlanta, ga
- Contact:
Re: Under Over
under over
noah mclaughlin
in the depths of Hades’ halls
she awaits in shadowed thrall
oh my
on the banks of Mnemosyne
she bathes in her memories
of sky
how she sings the hymn of us
it echoes on through Tartarus
oh me
in the golden Elysian fields
she sows these seeds & shields
for me
and the Sisters one-eyed watch
all black winter long
when the poet comes, debauch
with his lover’s song
on the mount above the clouds
there drinks a mighty crowd
ambrosia
at Delphi writhes a little girl
she questions a divided world
but won’t heed
she asks the Sphinx and Tiresias
to divine our secret trust
but they can’t say
all the spring and the summer, too
we soar on 'cross fields of blue
can’t stay
please stay
and the Sisters one-eyed watch
all white summer long
when the poet comes, debauch
with his lover’s song
and there she goes my divided love
another year gone by
but i know that we will meet again
another year gone by
noah mclaughlin
in the depths of Hades’ halls
she awaits in shadowed thrall
oh my
on the banks of Mnemosyne
she bathes in her memories
of sky
how she sings the hymn of us
it echoes on through Tartarus
oh me
in the golden Elysian fields
she sows these seeds & shields
for me
and the Sisters one-eyed watch
all black winter long
when the poet comes, debauch
with his lover’s song
on the mount above the clouds
there drinks a mighty crowd
ambrosia
at Delphi writhes a little girl
she questions a divided world
but won’t heed
she asks the Sphinx and Tiresias
to divine our secret trust
but they can’t say
all the spring and the summer, too
we soar on 'cross fields of blue
can’t stay
please stay
and the Sisters one-eyed watch
all white summer long
when the poet comes, debauch
with his lover’s song
and there she goes my divided love
another year gone by
but i know that we will meet again
another year gone by
"You sound like the ghost of David Bowie." - SchlimminyCricket | it was a pleasure to burn | my website | Juliet's Happy Dagger
- SchlimminyCricket
- Ain't Talkin' 'Bout Love
- Posts: 72
- Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2011 2:22 pm
- Instruments: synths and guits
- Submitting as: Schlimminy Cricket
Re: Under Over
Under Over
by Schlimminy Cricket
You need to know that I will fight you on this
And only one will make it out alive
You made your choice the moment you walked in
And left the paper on the other side
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever is over
I should have known before I let you in
You were a deadly viper in disguise
O demon monster, now the jig is up
Your lavatory habits set me wise
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever is over
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever
by Schlimminy Cricket
You need to know that I will fight you on this
And only one will make it out alive
You made your choice the moment you walked in
And left the paper on the other side
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever is over
I should have known before I let you in
You were a deadly viper in disguise
O demon monster, now the jig is up
Your lavatory habits set me wise
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever is over
Leave it under and I'll come in and turn it over
And then repeat until forever
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- Somebody Get Me A Doctor
- Posts: 102
- Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:57 am
- Submitting as: lalabrookie
Re: Under Over
Under the gun
And I'm over this situation
Here comes the thunder
Just when we thought we had it all
Under control
Yea I'm over this situation
Buried under
Can't even crawl away
I can't hold on to you
Doesn't matter how hard I try
I always have to give you up
Can't afford these tears I cry
I'm over over over
Under the gun
And I'm over this situation
Here comes the thunder
Just when we thought we had it all
Under control
Yea I'm over this situation
Buried under
Can't even crawl away
I'll sit and drink beer and gaze at you
My new plastic gas line
I must love you right?
Cause you're worth like a hundred cheap bottles of wine
You're a gas you're a gas (you'd better be a gas after what I just paid for you)
Come to think of it I'll pass
On this homeowner shit
(did somebody say For Rent?)
Cause I'm over it
And I'm over this situation
Here comes the thunder
Just when we thought we had it all
Under control
Yea I'm over this situation
Buried under
Can't even crawl away
I can't hold on to you
Doesn't matter how hard I try
I always have to give you up
Can't afford these tears I cry
I'm over over over
Under the gun
And I'm over this situation
Here comes the thunder
Just when we thought we had it all
Under control
Yea I'm over this situation
Buried under
Can't even crawl away
I'll sit and drink beer and gaze at you
My new plastic gas line
I must love you right?
Cause you're worth like a hundred cheap bottles of wine
You're a gas you're a gas (you'd better be a gas after what I just paid for you)
Come to think of it I'll pass
On this homeowner shit
(did somebody say For Rent?)
Cause I'm over it
Yea, I lost my groove...I lost my groove all over the place - Kat Criswell
- JonPorobil
- Beat It
- Posts: 5682
- Joined: Sat Sep 25, 2004 11:45 am
- Instruments: Piano, Guitar, Harmonica, Mandolin, Accordion, Bass, lots of VSTs
- Recording Method: Cubase 10.5
- Submitting as: Jon Eric, Jon Porobil, others
- Pronouns: He/Him
- Location: Pittsburgh, PA
- Contact:
Re: Under Over
Under Over
by Billy's Generic Trip
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
I'm dying to find out, baby, even though
(chorus)
You're insane (sane!) You're insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
Hit me!
If you want me, chase me around the yard
If you want me, chase me around the yard
If you want me, chase me around the yard
You look athletic, shouldn't be that hard
(chorus)
Hit me!
You put the ball between your legs, baby, legs, baby
So I could pass it overhead
I put the ball between my legs, baby, legs, baby
You pushed it back to me instead
You put the ball between my legs, baby, legs, baby
I didn't know what to do
I put the ball between your legs, baby, legs, baby
Lo and behold it turned blue
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
I swear if you write maybe, baby, I'll go crazy, baby, I'll go crazy, I will go
Insane (sane!) Go insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
You're insane (sane!) You're insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your
That's why I'm joining in your
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
by Billy's Generic Trip
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
Do you want me? Check one: Yes or No
I'm dying to find out, baby, even though
(chorus)
You're insane (sane!) You're insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
Hit me!
If you want me, chase me around the yard
If you want me, chase me around the yard
If you want me, chase me around the yard
You look athletic, shouldn't be that hard
(chorus)
Hit me!
You put the ball between your legs, baby, legs, baby
So I could pass it overhead
I put the ball between my legs, baby, legs, baby
You pushed it back to me instead
You put the ball between my legs, baby, legs, baby
I didn't know what to do
I put the ball between your legs, baby, legs, baby
Lo and behold it turned blue
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
Do you like me? Check one: Yes or no
I swear if you write maybe, baby, I'll go crazy, baby, I'll go crazy, I will go
Insane (sane!) Go insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
You're insane (sane!) You're insane
I'm only playing in your schoolyard games
I'm the same (same!) I'm the same
That's why I'm joining in your
That's why I'm joining in your
That's why I'm joining in your schoolyard games
"Warren Zevon would be proud." -Reve Mosquito
Stages, an album of about dealing with loss, anxiety, and grieving a difficult year, now available on Bandcamp and all streaming platforms! https://jonporobil.bandcamp.com/album/stages
Stages, an album of about dealing with loss, anxiety, and grieving a difficult year, now available on Bandcamp and all streaming platforms! https://jonporobil.bandcamp.com/album/stages
- Paco Del Stinko
- Hot for Teacher
- Posts: 3542
- Joined: Fri Apr 07, 2006 11:20 am
- Instruments: Basic rock, at a basic level.
- Recording Method: Roland 2480
- Submitting as: Paco del Stinko
- Location: Massachusetts. God save the Commonwealth!
Re: Under Over
Under Over - Paco del Stinko
I fell under her spell, now I'm over you
I didn't have a choice, there was nothing I could do
My upside is down
And my top is on the bottom
Just give me five minutes
And then you'll soon be forgotten
Hey hey! Whattya gonna do?
I don't know
Say say! You gotta tell her the truth
Leave me alone
You gotta make up your mind
I'll do what I do - And I'll be fine
I made it under the wire, but now I'm overtime
I was able to grab her love
Before she slipped away
But now I don't really want her
And my eye has started to stray
Hey hey! Whattya gonna do?
I don't know
Say say! You gotta tell her the truth
Leave me alone
You gotta make up your mind
I'll do what I do - And I'll be fine
I fell under, and now it's over
I fell under her spell, now I'm over you
I didn't have a choice, there was nothing I could do
My upside is down
And my top is on the bottom
Just give me five minutes
And then you'll soon be forgotten
Hey hey! Whattya gonna do?
I don't know
Say say! You gotta tell her the truth
Leave me alone
You gotta make up your mind
I'll do what I do - And I'll be fine
I made it under the wire, but now I'm overtime
I was able to grab her love
Before she slipped away
But now I don't really want her
And my eye has started to stray
Hey hey! Whattya gonna do?
I don't know
Say say! You gotta tell her the truth
Leave me alone
You gotta make up your mind
I'll do what I do - And I'll be fine
I fell under, and now it's over
Bringin' the stink since 2006.
- Billy's Little Trip
- Odie
- Posts: 12090
- Joined: Mon Nov 13, 2006 2:56 pm
- Instruments: Guitar, Bass, Vocals, Drums, Skin Flute
- Recording Method: analog to digital via Presonus FireBox, Cubase and a porn machine
- Submitting as: Billy's Little Trip, Billy and the Psychotics
- Location: Cali fucking ornia
Re: Under Over
Under Over
Music by BLT
Lead Guitar by Paco Del Stinko
Lyrics and Vocals by Ranger Denni
verse-
I take every risk
I made every last cue
I do this in the name of the idol of you
I hit every mark
make a stage out of the church of my heart
and an audience gathers to watch me fall apart
chorus-
Dissect me under my skin and
look me up and down
all over
I can't hide my life under
me when you cover .. over
verse-
You want a costume want a mask
I find I'm not up for the task
And I'm not as dangerous as I ...
…sound
I look around
and expectation surrounds me
I'm failing miserably
to be the person I'm meant to be, yeah
chorus-
Dissect me under my skin and
look me up and down
all over
I can't hide my life under
me when you cover .. over
look me up and down
search for what you wonder
just when you are over me
i'll love you drag you beneath
me when you cover … under … over
Music by BLT
Lead Guitar by Paco Del Stinko
Lyrics and Vocals by Ranger Denni
verse-
I take every risk
I made every last cue
I do this in the name of the idol of you
I hit every mark
make a stage out of the church of my heart
and an audience gathers to watch me fall apart
chorus-
Dissect me under my skin and
look me up and down
all over
I can't hide my life under
me when you cover .. over
verse-
You want a costume want a mask
I find I'm not up for the task
And I'm not as dangerous as I ...
…sound
I look around
and expectation surrounds me
I'm failing miserably
to be the person I'm meant to be, yeah
chorus-
Dissect me under my skin and
look me up and down
all over
I can't hide my life under
me when you cover .. over
look me up and down
search for what you wonder
just when you are over me
i'll love you drag you beneath
me when you cover … under … over
- Ross
- Jump
- Posts: 2745
- Joined: Sun Feb 27, 2005 3:27 pm
- Instruments: Guitar, Vox, Bass, Tuned glasses, etc...
- Recording Method: Logic on a Macbook.
- Submitting as: Ross Durand
- Location: Orange CA
- Contact:
Re: Under Over
Under Over
By Ross Durand *
You had some kinda magic, it pulled me in
A little misdirection, a little sleight of hand
But I guess it's a bout time, you couldn't hide it from view
I was under your spell, but now I'm over you*
Yeah all smoke and mirrors and one-way glass
Yeah, baby, when you you pull one you pull it fast
And though you knew how to make me feel like the world was brand new
I was under your spell but now I'm over you
I was underwhelmed when I learned how you pulled a fast one on me
No I shouldn't have underestimated your over the top scheme
It's the undertones that get me not how it was over so fast
I understand it's better now than later that I'm over you at last
Now the magic is gone, yeah the doves have all flown
And I'm left with the mirrors and smoke all on my own
But your very last trick was the best that you can do
Cause I'm under the spell that makes me believe that I'm over you
Yeah I'm under the spell that makes me believe I'm over you.
*my eyes just about fell out when I saw Paco's lyrics. But the time stamp on his lyric post should dispell any suspiscion that I stole the line from him. Great minds, as they say....
By Ross Durand *
You had some kinda magic, it pulled me in
A little misdirection, a little sleight of hand
But I guess it's a bout time, you couldn't hide it from view
I was under your spell, but now I'm over you*
Yeah all smoke and mirrors and one-way glass
Yeah, baby, when you you pull one you pull it fast
And though you knew how to make me feel like the world was brand new
I was under your spell but now I'm over you
I was underwhelmed when I learned how you pulled a fast one on me
No I shouldn't have underestimated your over the top scheme
It's the undertones that get me not how it was over so fast
I understand it's better now than later that I'm over you at last
Now the magic is gone, yeah the doves have all flown
And I'm left with the mirrors and smoke all on my own
But your very last trick was the best that you can do
Cause I'm under the spell that makes me believe that I'm over you
Yeah I'm under the spell that makes me believe I'm over you.
*my eyes just about fell out when I saw Paco's lyrics. But the time stamp on his lyric post should dispell any suspiscion that I stole the line from him. Great minds, as they say....
"I don't like this song, but at least it's good." - veGetar Ianra Ge
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Re: Under Over
'you better not ever tell anyone'
that's what she said through her bubblegum
as i reached in breached her camisole
cupped her breast as if holding a small animal
'damn your hands are cold' she says to my touch
i go all in she feels my clutch
my flesh warms on her breasts
she got a pretty face like Chloe Grace Moretz
her chest is so soft, her nips are so not
the bets are all off, she's lookin' so hot
retreat my hands and tent her shirt
she spits her gum out to the dirt
i insert inside, her flesh is milk white
she must looks 3 months due from outside
i lick her belly, lick her rib
lick her areola, suck her tit
lick her tit and start to multitask
creeping up her thigh towards her ass
she reacts, chest goes back, hips go back
chest goes forward my nose hurts quite bad
i retract and i can feel the drip
from my left nostril on my lip
she claims she's sorry, she didn't mean it
peels her shirt off as my blood pours thick
i got under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the shirt, over the bra
under the shirt she had no bra
under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the bleachers, over the chains
under the bleachers, no restraints
UN - ROSEBUD
she licks my nose blood, picks her clothes up
deep kiss like it was our last
wraps her shirt round my face like a ninja mask
grabs my wrist and guides my hand
my muffled voice asks if i can
are you sure? 'i am' she responds
fur hits my fingers, flesh hits my palm
oh, she's such a maverick
walking around in just a skirt, no other fabric
i couldn't imagine this bush this skin
i barely touched and she pushed me in
so deep that my thumb brushed the brim
her face got flushed her eyes got slim
she pulls me out, she pulls me in
her breath got shallow she raised her chin
all neck all navel
she's Joan Crawford, i'm Clark Gable
i'm hard and able but this instant
i hear people in the distance
she does too she's trying to finish
as they reach the benches i feel the clenches
the wetness the moan her happiness stabs
puts her shirt on, looks like a Japanese flag
i got under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the skirt, over the panties
under the skirt she had no panties
under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the bleachers, over the chains
under the bleachers, no restraints
that's what she said through her bubblegum
as i reached in breached her camisole
cupped her breast as if holding a small animal
'damn your hands are cold' she says to my touch
i go all in she feels my clutch
my flesh warms on her breasts
she got a pretty face like Chloe Grace Moretz
her chest is so soft, her nips are so not
the bets are all off, she's lookin' so hot
retreat my hands and tent her shirt
she spits her gum out to the dirt
i insert inside, her flesh is milk white
she must looks 3 months due from outside
i lick her belly, lick her rib
lick her areola, suck her tit
lick her tit and start to multitask
creeping up her thigh towards her ass
she reacts, chest goes back, hips go back
chest goes forward my nose hurts quite bad
i retract and i can feel the drip
from my left nostril on my lip
she claims she's sorry, she didn't mean it
peels her shirt off as my blood pours thick
i got under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the shirt, over the bra
under the shirt she had no bra
under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the bleachers, over the chains
under the bleachers, no restraints
UN - ROSEBUD
she licks my nose blood, picks her clothes up
deep kiss like it was our last
wraps her shirt round my face like a ninja mask
grabs my wrist and guides my hand
my muffled voice asks if i can
are you sure? 'i am' she responds
fur hits my fingers, flesh hits my palm
oh, she's such a maverick
walking around in just a skirt, no other fabric
i couldn't imagine this bush this skin
i barely touched and she pushed me in
so deep that my thumb brushed the brim
her face got flushed her eyes got slim
she pulls me out, she pulls me in
her breath got shallow she raised her chin
all neck all navel
she's Joan Crawford, i'm Clark Gable
i'm hard and able but this instant
i hear people in the distance
she does too she's trying to finish
as they reach the benches i feel the clenches
the wetness the moan her happiness stabs
puts her shirt on, looks like a Japanese flag
i got under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the skirt, over the panties
under the skirt she had no panties
under, over, under, over
under, over, un-under, over
under the bleachers, over the chains
under the bleachers, no restraints